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07-23-2008, 07:32 AM #1
... Rather feel pain ...My sixth poem... hope u guyz like it...
I see her in my dreams,
I want her back I plead,
Everything remains the same it seems,
I stand there with my torn jeans,
Looking at her with some reprieve,
She turns away and begins to flee.
Now I stare at the mirror,
My spine feels a shiver,
Will she ever be a forgiver
Is what I begin to wonder...
The pain I feel doesn’t dither
The Sun releases its beams of fire.
There isn’t a day when I don’t cry,
She didn’t even say the word goodbye,
Halfway around the world she flies,
The mood swings are never gonna die,
Wish my mom sang me a lullaby,
Now cold and lonely is all but my lyfe.
Those letters we used to write every day,
When I bring them out I feel ok,
Sitting down near the Gods and beginning to pray,
All the dogs outside all goin astray,
They bark and I forget what I was meant to say,
I’m broken, and yet I am to pay.
They said I’m lucky,
But I said wtf! That aint me,
She left and said hell with reality,
I was pulled to earth again by gravity,
My heart in her mouth eaten with no pity,
A July clearly isn’t too holy for me.
All the suffering is hard for me to bare,
I remember u too much and I still care,
I don’t think u understand that this aint fair,
This love of yours is sitting on a chair,
She still thinks of u in her every breath of air,
Hey, I know u miss messin wid his hair.
Gone forever after tying me with a chain,
I was doubted and thrown like a ball,
But what indeed did she gain?
By making me fall?
And now I rather feel pain...
Than nothing at all...
07-23-2008, 08:16 AM #2
07-24-2008, 07:51 AM #3
Great, as usual my smexy brotherAn Everlasting Summer Romance --- In Process
07-24-2008, 08:36 AM #4
U guyz inspire me to write more... what can I say... I have such great buddies...
07-25-2008, 01:40 AM #5
*siiiigh* Mr.Teletubie ur TOOooo gooood!!!!! CHoooo touchin!! YOur just Mindblowinggg!!
THnx so much Falu!!! So HOT!
07-25-2008, 02:34 AM #6
Cause I'd Rather Feel Pain Than Nothin At Alllll
Pain Without Love Pain I Cant Get Enough Pain Cus I Like It Rough I'd Rather Feel Pain Than Nothin At Alll Loll
Niceeeeeeee Writing Abhi
Keeeeep It Up
07-25-2008, 08:15 PM #7
thankz Kamzie Pie
lolz Payal Ji, thanks ... btw was that a song..
07-26-2008, 04:35 AM #8
yea it is brother.
its Pain by Three Days GraceAn Everlasting Summer Romance --- In Process
07-26-2008, 10:05 PM #9
Lolz I know...
I listen to their songs almost everyday... thtz why I included their two linez towards the end...