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    I see your voice
    I touch your smell
    I hear your stare
    It's hard to tell
    I know you're here
    you're very close
    I smell you sweetly
    like my breakfast toast




    you're so wild, you drive me crazy
    you wear me out and make me lazy
    you're on my mind all day while it's light
    I try to sleep but you're still there at night
    Your words are right and so very clear
    I can hear the deepness, I can hear you near
    you make me smile, you make me shine
    I take your hand and you take mine
    you brush my hair and take care of me




    I love the way you see me for me
    Time goes by fast when I'm with you
    One minute it's 1:00, the next it's 2:00
    you make me sad, I don't know why
    you make me mad, you make me cry
    but when it's done and through is through
    I will always be there, my love is true


    I look in your eyes and deeply stare
    and when we fight my heart will tear
    I love you so much, but what about you???
    I'm unsure of your love, I don't know what to do
    I think of you now, I'll think of you then


    you'll always be in my heart, my love has no end
    I try to hold back when my tears fall
    none of this is fair, none of it at all
    Now my poem must conclude, now my poem is through
    I dedicate this with deariness, I dedicate this to you.....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?

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    very touching good one
    sorry dude .... Hash

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    wow.....very touchy poem...u're such a good write yousuf.....keep it up ^_____^




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    wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww very touchin

    Keep it up









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    aww really cute

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    nicee work vip





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    I usually forgive.. but only ma self

 

 

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