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  1. #1
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    Oct 2008

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    */_Her dad was a drunk

    Her mom was an addict
    Her parents kept her
    Locked in an attic

    Her only friend
    Was a little toy bear
    It was old and worn out
    And had patches of hair

    She always talked to it
    When no one's around
    She lays there and hugs it
    Not a peep of sound

    Until her parents
    Unlock the door
    Some more and more pain
    She'll have to endure

    A bruise on her leg
    A scar on her face
    Why would she be
    In such a horrible place?

    But she grabs her bear
    And softly cries
    She loves her parents
    But they want her to die

    She sits in the corner
    Quiet but thinking,
    "Please God, why is
    My life always sinking? "

    Such a bad life
    For a sad little kid
    She'd get beaten and beaten
    For anything she did

    Then one night
    Her mom came home high
    And the poor child was beaten
    As hours went by

    Then her mom suddenly
    Grabbed for a blade
    It was sharp and pointy
    One that she made

    She thrust the blade
    Right in her chest,
    "You deserve to die
    You worthless piece of stuff!

    The mom walked out
    Leaving the girl slowly dieing
    She grabbed her bear
    And again started crying

    Police showed up
    At the small little house
    Then quickly barged in
    Everything quiet as a mouse

    One officer slowly
    Opened a door
    To find the little girl
    Lying dead on the floor

    It must have been bad
    To go through so much harm
    But at least she died
    With her best friend in her arms

  2. #2
    Landed To DesiRulez
    Join Date
    Nov 2008


    ahh such a touchy poem.... u rock. in medical term its called battered baby syndrome.

  3. #3
    Retired Staff
    Join Date
    Sep 2008
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    Its kinda double post Reshma - merge this with your General Discussion thread

  4. #4


    awesome awesome poem.
    thank you so much for posting
    its so touching and sadly this does happen =/
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  5. #5
    Retired Staff
    Join Date
    Mar 2010


    Nice poem,Thanks for sharing



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