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    can anyone give me a wake up call, i want to arise-
    after a decade of slavery with closed eyes.

    I am the soul, whom people call the immortal,
    but i am the slave of mind and five senses in total.

    I am confined in a body, with silent tears,
    I cry for freedom but have unknown fears.

    Period of imprisonment is not certain,
    though we call it as the lifetime.

    Life has taught me to smile, life has taught me to cry,
    life has taught me how to face obstacles and to defy.

    Whenever I stumble in my path by facing the God's wrath,
    a divinity comes in my way, keeping hurdles at bay.

    I cant remember the goals set by the god,
    though i could recall it when i was a growing bud.

    Sometimes I want to fly high up in the sky,
    with all my hopes and aspirations come alive.

    The world is so cruel that all my dreams got shattered,
    and my existence is humiliated, betrayed and disgraced.

    I cant hear the voice of eternity, its noisy outside,
    gone are those days for which i was taking pride.

    Purity was my shield and sanctity was my armour,
    till a tide came and sinking is my honour.

    I will rise, I will fight as its not all over,
    I will break the ice regaining my lost vigour.

    I can see a ray dazzling at distant horizon,
    give me an impulse and make me reach my salvation.

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    its good is it urs?



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    i was bout to ask that too






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    thanks for this poem

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    yes buddy its mine. whenever i get time out of my hectic MBBS study i juss love 2 write poems.

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    great poem shann. keep it up



 

 

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