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    THE KISS ...
    my seventh poem.... on my first kiss....

    Remember that night under the bridge,
    When the train passed through the ridge,
    The lake looked bright,
    And you leaped with delight,
    That one moment of happiness,
    Along with the freedom from the harness.
    That was put on us by society,
    But I was lost only lost in your beauty,
    But in that moment I will remember,
    That one kiss, with which
    The rest of my life I shall spend in bliss.

    I saw you move farther and farther.
    And people who didn't matter came between us one after another.
    And in that moment,
    I let go of you,
    I lost you to the ocean’s blue.
    But all my life I will pass,
    When through the glass,
    I see that one moment,
    That one kiss, with which
    The rest of my life I shall spend in bliss.

    Every day I grow older,
    I try to be bolder,
    The choices I have made,
    Brings to reality my fate,
    Every moment was a treasure,
    That one part of pleasure,
    You came to me as a white dove,
    Then I lost you in the clouds above,
    But I will always remember that moment,
    That one kiss, with which
    The rest of my life I shall spend in bliss.

    The warmth your lips gave me,
    I would never return to reality,
    I look out of my window,
    Past the trees, way below,
    The sand that I played with as a child,
    The castle I dreamt of in which we would reside,
    But, now I never give up that moment,
    That one kiss, with which
    The rest of my life I shall spend in bliss.


    Hope u guyz liked it
    Last edited by SMOKILLZ; 07-28-2008 at 03:57 AM.


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    haha, really nice..
    enjoyed reading it.

    aww thanks payal, luv ya too.


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    Haiii:rolleyes:....aw omg that is sooo romanticish n too sweeet!!Wooow!!U rock!*siiiigh*

    THnx so much Falu!!! So HOT!

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    nice
    i liked it

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    I was the first to read it! =D
    It rocks, as usual!
    Beautitfulll, my brother
    An Everlasting Summer Romance --- In Process

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    Quote Originally Posted by /// View Post
    I was the first to read it! =D
    It rocks, as usual!
    Beautitfulll, my brother


    gracias Di

    and thanks everyone elsee!!!


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    aawww dats nyce thnx..
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    I Read Each Sentence Of It Cause It Grabbed My Attention
    Each Bit Of It Seemed So Real Something We Can Just Feel And Relate Too
    I Loveddddddddddddddd It I Mean Wow I Cant Beleive You Rote That Lol I Hardly Talk To You & The Much That I Do I Never Thought U Cud Rite Somethin So GOooooD
    Amazin Poem

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    Yes Payal, this iz real... I and I loved ur reaction to it cuz it means soo much to me.

    This poem was written with soo much emotion itz hard to find words to describe what I cud say... thus I wrote this poem...

    Thanks Hina as well...


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