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    Where are you when I need you most?
    You disappeared into the darkness
    You left nothing behind but your memory
    And for me to wait for you

    Your heartfelt spirit is absent now
    The smiles have wiped off the faces
    Of the people you deserted here
    You caused internal forever pain

    I, the one you loved am crippled
    Because of your sudden vacation
    Your vacation that would last a lifetime
    To a secret resort I will never know of

    What made you decide to change your mind?
    You made me feel I wasnâ??t good enough for you
    Maybe that is true, maybe it is not
    But now, how will I ever know?

    I have been trying to thrust your memory aside
    So I could get on with my life
    I have tried to love someone other than you
    Yet, somehow you remain the main focus

    My outlook on life has changed, you know
    And yes, it is because of your actions
    You left me here alone to put up with this
    This life I can not live without you



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    Thanks Hash bhai for this poem

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    Thanks hashy bhai. This is a good poem.



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    bohat khoob janab
    acha andaaz hai shikayat ka
    tc



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    shakayat hi tu kar sakte hain aur kuch nahi



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    ohh dear sorry mere lafzon ne aap ko gahmgeen kiya
    maafi
    keep writing
    tc



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    arrey nahi hum itni jaldee ghamgheen nahi hote



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    aap ko hona bhi naheen chahyeh kiyon ke dard aur takleef se guzar kar hi hum muzboot bante hain.....be brave man
    tc



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    great poem Hash

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    bravery ka award bhi milla hai

    thanks shahid for comment



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    bohat khoob......



 

 

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