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    No one understands where I?m at, yet they love assuming?
    Better yet love bringing up old crap...
    You wanted me out, so I was gone?poof with a snap.
    Now what goes wrong what goes right, no one should complain...it?s my life.
    Whether it?s full of complications or as straight as a turn why should anyone but me be concerened with strife..?

    I?m cold and hot, I?m a mix of completed and not.
    So what should I do?
    Keep on rockin and rollin, talking about all that keeps the fake smile seem so real?
    Singing and making others laugh, so they think its perfection, when its not so.
    Let?s make a deal, all your benefits, over none of mine.
    I?ll be the me, who worries over everything, and now unable to face the straight line.

    So used to the curves and squiggles, simplicity has lost to the rest.
    I?m not the best, its better.
    I?d rather have nothing then anything, because I won?t have to cry over what was once on the platter.
    And then another, I won?t dissolve when it?s me at latter.
    I?m broken apart, especially my heart but I?m good at taping it all together.
    But its hurts much more, when it falls apart and you know it?s almost like forever.

    Then you have them special?s, those who are never make me feel artifical.
    They are the ones who you would make sure to keep everything taped up.
    Making you feel like a full glass of water, never a half fulled cup.
    As I write all this, I think that I?ve got a special that always is another rock.
    At times I feel like grinning and saying I?ve got shiny diamonds, but then again I?m not the type to mock.
    Insiders and Outsiders its all about what gets you affected more.
    And it?s I who should choose, welcome insiders and goodbye to the rest, it is what it is and I?ll stick with the those who don?t like me tore.
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    nice poem... i think u should be a teacher

    good job.



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    it was more of a freestyle poem lol

    thanx for sharing though






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    W9W this was a big poem!!!

    thnx for da sig payal!


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    O Sarahh, this poem is so full of emotion..sigh, u shud have seen my face while i was going through it. I was nearly into tears. It is so similar to the one that I wrote a while ago. I love to read your poems. Keep sharing them kitty.

    lemme tell you one thing. Whenever you feel something like this, share ur feelings with some1 or try to bring out ur feelings by writing a poem like this, it helps a lot. And as we already talked about, it shocks us when we read a poem like this after some time.

    Good Work kittyyy

    aww thanks payal, luv ya too.


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    kewl kitty kat awesome well done gurl....
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    aw awesum poem
    i can never write a poem lyke this lol
    well done sarah *hug*


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    Quote Originally Posted by Abhi View Post
    nice poem... i think u should be a teacher

    good job.

    heheh thanks abhi.
    yeaaa english teacher, right?
    lolol.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Solution View Post
    it was more of a freestyle poem lol

    thanx for sharing though
    hehehe mhmm.
    thanks for reading and appreciating
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    Quote Originally Posted by varis View Post
    W9W this was a big poem!!!
    lolol
    yeaaa.
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    Quote Originally Posted by ρяίи?έ View Post
    O Sarahh, this poem is so full of emotion..sigh, u shud have seen my face while i was going through it. I was nearly into tears. It is so similar to the one that I wrote a while ago. I love to read your poems. Keep sharing them kitty.

    lemme tell you one thing. Whenever you feel something like this, share ur feelings with some1 or try to bring out ur feelings by writing a poem like this, it helps a lot. And as we already talked about, it shocks us when we read a poem like this after some time.

    Good Work kittyyy
    Yea sh its full of emotion. Awwwww. *Hug* Your so sweet! Alrighty hun, I will keep on sharing, especially when I get such wonderful comments back. Yes I will, though its hard to share...it does get me shocked..when I re read it...but it makes me realize how stronger I've gotten by being able to express my feelings. Thanks...because you were there for me and let me tell you, you are one of those shiny diamonds.
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    Quote Originally Posted by angel_eyes View Post
    kewl kitty kat awesome well done gurl....
    Thanks alot afreen
    Very sweet of you.
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    Quote Originally Posted by angel of rosez View Post
    aw awesum poem
    i can never write a poem lyke this lol
    well done sarah *hug*
    Thanks so much Sky.
    Everyone can write poems well like this....lolol.
    *Hug* your so sweet thanks.
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    awwwwwwwwwwws its reallllllly nice it expresses every single feeling u prbly had at tht moment ii luv to rite poems
    ii cud juz POUR EVERYTHIN OUT nd dats wht u did keeeeeeeeeeep dat upppppp

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    Quote Originally Posted by |*Payal*| View Post
    awwwwwwwwwwws its reallllllly nice it expresses every single feeling u prbly had at tht moment ii luv to rite poems
    ii cud juz POUR EVERYTHIN OUT nd dats wht u did keeeeeeeeeeep dat upppppp
    awww thanks payali.
    yep yep.
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    Choo chweet my dear... it was very emotional... sighh... such a strong poem!

    Amazing work, I'm in such a good mood of writing stuff now and after reading that I have been inspired further!

    Great stuff Dii!

    *Huggie*


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    Thanks alot bhai *hug*
    Awwww your tooo sweet.
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    omg!!!! sarah!! itz damn gud..! i wish u cud see me cryin ova here!!

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    i have the tissue paper ready go ahead Jia lol






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    Awwwww thanks so much Jiaaa!
    Very nice of you!
    *hug*
    And sheraz *rolleyes*
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