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    REWIND...Back In Time...
    My Fifth Poem... hope u like it...


    If I could rewind and go back in time,
    I'd do all I could to make you mine.
    If I could rewind and go back in time,
    I wouldn't mess up, I'd keep things perfectly fine.
    But nobody knows how bad things were,
    And a moment came when my life was all but a blur.
    But oh Baby,
    You gotta believe me,
    When I say that,
    If I could rewind and go back in time,
    I'd do all I could to make you mine.

    I didn't know when things went wrong,
    If only someone had alarmed me with a ding-dong.
    But now I know where I went bad,
    And Baby believe me I'm a whole new lad.
    I'm sorry Gurl for the things I did,
    how I broke your heart when good-bye I bid.
    For how I told you that all your letters I would burn or tear,
    And for saying that I did not care.
    But oh Baby
    You gotta believe me
    When I say that
    If I could rewind and go back in time,
    I'd do all I could to make you mine.

    Talk to me or just give me a sign,
    Oh Baby please,
    Tell me you're mine,
    See I'm on my knees.
    I ask for your forgiveness,
    'Cuz I know I created this whole mess.
    I know life ain't a music CD,
    That I could keep playin to my fantasy.
    But hey Baby,
    Listen to me,
    I love you Princess,
    And to catch just a glimpse of you,
    I'd violate any curfew.
    You're my gurl, you're my all,
    You're the only one who can save me this fall.
    But oh Baby
    You gotta believe me
    When I say that
    If I could rewind and go back in time,
    I'd give you all the love to me that you gave,
    And I'd also prove to you that I am brave.
    If I could rewind and go back in time,
    I'd do all I could to make you mine.
    If I could rewind and go back in time,
    I wouldn't mess up, I'd keep things fine.
    But nobody knows how bad things went,
    And then when my life became bent.
    But oh Baby
    You gotta believe me
    When I say that
    If I could rewind and go back in time,
    I'd do all I could to make you mine..


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    its beautiful man






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    Thanks bro


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    Omg how niiiceeeeeeee!!!!aweesomeee cho chweeet!!!!

    THnx so much Falu!!! So HOT!

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    I read the first version yesterday, and the edited version again and its still just as beautiful. You know my exact reaction to it yesterday. Too good Navz, keep it up bro.
    An Everlasting Summer Romance --- In Process

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    thanks Di and thanks Kamzie... ooohh that rhymed too!!


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    wowwwww!!!!!!!!! that was soo emotional yaar!
    Plz make some more!

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    its very nice...thanks

    PLZ CLICK TO VIEW HIDDEN STUFF!!!

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    You can find more of my poems in this Section...


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    simple and beautiful
    love it
    Last edited by Solution24; 08-12-2008 at 12:01 AM.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Angel View Post
    simple and beautiful
    love it
    THANKS Ji!


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