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    Do you know how much i love u?
    the way i look at you,does it show the love i have for you?

    Can you feel my touch and presence around?
    distances have kept us apart but have strengthened the bond..

    Admist the thorns..buds that have shown the presence of love in pain,
    i need you to hold me and take me for a ride in rain,

    True love is what i need from you,
    let me now feel the same in you

    Tender heart and divine is the love gifted by God,
    want to share it with you,will i be allowed?

    Please come and rescue me and take away all my fear,
    for i just want to be with you forever and near

    You are my soul and happiness that i desire,
    you are my life...the air i respire

    Every second,my heart beats for you,
    just to say..its waiting for you
    Oh Dear..i still love you

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    That was true class dear Kinjal... I will look forward to reading more of this... It was a great poem of expression!

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    Amazing stuff!!!

    I got competition, ohh and like Mr.Edward said, it is classy! No doubt!

    Well done Kinjal!!!


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    awwwwwwwwwwwww that is choo chweet kinju!!! Awesomeee

    THnx so much Falu!!! So HOT!

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    Quote Originally Posted by *~*Kamala*~* View Post
    awwwwwwwwwwwww that is choo chweet kinju!!! Awesomeee
    kamzi it was for you

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    Quote Originally Posted by кιηנαℓ View Post
    kamzi it was for you
    What sisterly love, but I dont think it was for her, as I am sure a bloke wud have written much more...

    This poem was written for someone special, that person whom u reach for but cannot grab, that person is lucky.

    This site has some talents no doubt!

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    Who's the lucky guy Kinjal?

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    i agree wid EDWARD

    lol n exactly who is the lucky guy ghonchi

    @poem splendid work






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    frankly..i really dunno who the lucky guy is!

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    the poem is shooo gud!! really nyc keep it up!!

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    Thanks for sharing,i have the same issue

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    wow nice poem

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    very strong one


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    oh shit damn!!!!!! this is a HOT poem awesome work!!! kinjuuu
    sorry dude .... Hash

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    lol thanks guys

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ťŋē ώү 'm View Post
    oh shit damn!!!!!! this is a HOT poem awesome work!!! kinjuuu

    lol so true mehran

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    thanks alot for sharing!



 

 

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