Results 1 to 9 of 9
  1. #1
    Retired Staff www.desirulez.net
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Posts
    4,186

    T

    Talking Hapiness Is Unexpected - By Payalie :D

    Follow us on Social Media







    happiness is unexpected

    when everything was going wrong
    life seemed like this horrible sounding song
    each second with fights and arguements made it too long

    just than one thing fell into place
    every detail that was left out was back filled in that empty space
    life was just now off my case

    personally im thinking bad times later on bring the best
    now with everything ive got,i should just forget the rest
    ive tottaly passed with flyin colors on a huge test

    now being with what i enjoy the most in life
    also having my true love with me in life
    its all good and complete, which makes it a great life

    but as they always say its never too late to jinx it
    but i know that my life is now perfectly fit
    so dont bring in no sh*t


    By
    Me
    Last edited by Angelic_Me; 04-22-2008 at 02:41 AM.

  2. #2
    dR Angels www.desirulez.net
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Posts
    1,393

    T

    Default

    woww thats awsomeeee!!!! chooo Chweeet! R u gonna show DHruv??hehe

    THnx so much Falu!!! So HOT!

  3. #3
    Coolbie www.desirulez.net
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Posts
    759

    T

    Default

    Payaalieeee tht was really good.
    Hopefully everything will always remain this good for you and even better.
    An Everlasting Summer Romance --- In Process

  4. #4
    Retired Staff www.desirulez.net
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Posts
    4,186

    T

    Default

    well hez dar is ONE little part Lol jk
    but ofcurz every person dat ii know will understand it will c it

  5. #5
    Retired Staff www.desirulez.net
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Posts
    4,186

    T

    Default

    sarah
    Thnkkkkkkkkkkkkkk u
    ii hope too
    im gonna work hard to make shur it stays gud cuz u gotta work in life to make it awsomee

  6. #6
    Retired Staff www.desirulez.net
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Posts
    364

    T

    Default

    nice poem, dont rhyme but makes sense!

    thnx for da sig payal!


    edit :- http://www.desirulez.net/showthread.php?t=554743

  7. #7
    The Creator :) www.desirulez.org
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Posts
    11,198

    T

    Default

    its gr8 pepsi TFS






  8. #8
    Retired Staff www.desirulez.net
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Posts
    1,516

    T

    Default

    kwl one payal....

    a very thoughtfull n realistic poem lol....

    its best wen one writes wat they feel lol i totally agree wid yeh ....

    keep it up Gurl....
    Plzzzzzzz HiT On If U like My Posts .....


    I WaNna Be d GuRl HeEz ScArEd To LoSe ....
    ThE OnE WhO He CaNt WaLk AwAy FrOm KnOwIn ShEeZ MaD At HiM.....ThE OnE WhO CaNt FaLl AsLeEp WiDoUt HeR VoIcE BeInG ThE LaSt OnE ThAt He HeArS ....
    ThE OnE He WoUlDeNt KnOw WhAtTa do WiThOut.....
    ThE OnE He CaNt PiCtUrE BeInG WiThOuT.
    ..

  9. #9
    Coolest Person You Will Ever Know! www.desirulez.net
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Posts
    2,443

    T

    Default

    Quote Originally Posted by varis View Post
    nice poem, dont rhyme but makes sense!
    lol it does rhyme man....don't know wat u are talking about

    Payal....thats a nice lil poem. There is some stuff that can be fixed, but its a great start for you.
    The best part of the poem is that it portrays ur feelings and emotions..when a writer is able to do that, it means he/she has great potential =P

    No matter how much we fight in the sb , i will always say u are a great human being, like forreal....i know exactly how u felt while writing this poem. I ve been through that myself =P, good work sweety.

    aww thanks payal, luv ya too.


    edit :- http://www.desirulez.net/showthread.php?t=554743

 

 

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •