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    Its another one i wrote some time back in the day... hope u like it... Its another sadd one

    After what you did the other day,
    I ought to be mad at you baby.
    But come what may,
    I am too gentle maybe.
    I want the phone to ring,
    When it does,
    I wish you’re the one calling.
    When I hear the door-bell buzz,
    I wish it was you standing outside my door.
    I wish I could into oblivion fall,
    Because this I can’t take anymore.
    As I sit here wishing it was your call.

    The rain pours down,
    Off the roof,
    And on to my beautiful lawn,
    As it drowns my dog’s woof.
    I wish this were unreal,
    Just like our relationship,
    That ended in total betrayal.
    I wish into oblivion I could fall,
    Because I can’t take anymore of your false portrayal,
    As I sit here wishing it was your call.

    We would’ve made it,
    If you gave it a chance,
    And now all you can do is admit,
    That you should’ve rejected me at first glance!
    Then why did you play with my heart?
    And then laugh,
    Like a child after letting out a fart!
    And since what you did with me is the biggest gaffe,
    I’ll let you know that after that,
    I’ve been dying.
    On your door mat,
    I’ve been lying.
    I wish into oblivion I could fall,
    Because as hard as I’m trying,
    I can do nothing but sit here wishing it was your call.

    Hope u guyz liked it...


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    Awwwww that was so sad Abhinav
    Good Job
    Keep posting your poems
    It's awesome to having to get a chance to read em.
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    aww u know wht
    if tht person does care she will call
    its really nicee hve no words

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    aaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww .... dats a very sad.. but nyce poem...
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    All 3 of you'll left sweet comments

    I am writing my third poem now...


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    lol...then laugh like a child after letting out a fart...lolllzz

 

 

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