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    Nothing is exciting about this boring town. Everyday people doing same things like, Mr. Larry mowing his lawn every week. Or Mrs. Bury dancing around in her backyard, she still thinks she is an age of 20-year-old. But the truth is she is nearly 60, can you believe that. Front Royal, Maryland, only name is royal but nothing is royalty like in this small town of Garrett County. Only the old folks live here. It’s very rare if you find someone of my age. We only have only one school, if we have more then 20 students than we have to share our chairs and desks with them. One time Ms. Caroline had me share my desks with a new student name Billy Submore. I used to call him a stinky old rat. That guy never in his life took a shower I guess. Wearing the same clothes everyday and ate like a pig. But there are others who I cherish and love like my mum, pa, my granny, and my best friend looney. Looney’s is a heck of a funny guy, he got the best jokes in the whole town. He wants to work in the films when he grows up, so he act funny and goofy there. Than there is Daisy, she is the love of my life, beauty of this town, and dazzling my heart.

    “John Lockheart Smith, Young man your still sleeping its time for school” Said Mum. “In a minute” I said.
    I got up, wore my same old uniform which mum borrowed from my auntie Mrs. Linking. I guess her son Dudley has grown into them more. That piggy face, pink legs like piggy never fits anything and my parents doesn’t have the money to buy me new ones.
    “Mum do you have to make pancakes everyday” I said.
    “John you should be thankful for what we have and what we get” Mum Said
    “Yeah yeah everyday lecture” I said under my breath
    School was never fun for me. I wanted to work and have money like grown-ups. I want to be wealthy like old folks and have all the fame in life. I think of myself as a grown up too. But mum and pa never understand my feelings and how I feel. They’re only happy with whatever we have and make. Even a dime makes them happy. But happy to me is being wealthy. I don’t know why we cant be rich like other white folks. I guess bad luck runs in ma family, well its time for me to change it and rule da world. Am old enough to drop outta school now I will be 17 next month. Am a man.

    Today at school Ms. Caroline read us the most romantic book Romeo and Juliet. That book never interest me. I mean what’s so good about it. Romeo such a phony guy. First he was in love with that girl Rose something and now he is in love with Juliet the next day. I thought he was depressed. This phony story is so unreal, I bet if someone have tried this they must have got a reality check. To me love is only one time, passionate; I would give everything to that person, and trust/honesty. I see Daisy was very deep in this crap I don’t know why she love this Romeo guy so much. This guy is not even real such an idiot. She wants her ideal man to be him. But she aint getting anyone like that in reality.

    “Mr. John Lockheart do you mind sharing this scene and acting it with Ms. Daisy after your done with your daydreaming” Said Ms. Caroline
    “Huh? I can’t act Ms. Caroline,” I Said
    “That’s why we are doing this play to find hidden talents from you bright students and everyone gotta be in it and I mean it John,” Ms. Caroline.
    “Aite I will give it a try it wont be good,” I Said

    After school, while walking with Looney to home.

    “Yo John who you playing in da play,” Looney Said
    “I gotta play that phony Romeo,” I Said
    “Wow,” Looney Said
    “Ya, I know it’s so idiotic,” I Said
    “Yo man do ya know who is playing Juliet, its yo home girl Daisy,” Looney Said
    “WOW I can’t believe it man, aite man home’s here and you know how mum is aite later,” I Said
    “aite man later,” Looney Said

    At home

    John come downstairs for dinner, this is your Pa speaking to you.
    “He haven’t eaten anything since he came back from school, I am worried about him John” Said Mum.
    Give him sometime Mary, you just worried about everything. Said Pa

    On a sleepless night, sparkling of stars, dazzling glitter of the dark, and yawning of the pale white moon.
    I couldn’t sleep the whole night; I couldn’t believe my ears and what Looney said about me being next to Daisy and holding her hand.

    “John, I cant believe it your making me wear this white dress” Said Daisy
    “You look perfect Daisy love, you’re the most beautiful girl I have ever met in my life,” I Said
    “Alright it time” Said Daisy
    “Time for us to be together forever” I Said
    “John John John wake up wake up WAKE UP!” Said Mum
    “Time for you to go with your Pa to the Baker’s field to work, he doesn’t want to be late today John so you better wake up” Said Mum
    “I am awake mum, why are you always after me and broke my best dream” I said
    “It’s Saturday lots of work to be done on the fields and autumn is coming, Mr. Baker wants fields to be cleared” Said Mum


    I never liked the Bakers, not because of Mr. Baker. But his son Jacob, always bossing me around and never letting me do anything. He is always the gorgeous one, that blond silky hair, handsome face, and model like features. Most of the girls find him god like, one of the Greek God. That guy is a moron, always making everyone feel jealous and down. Mr. Baker is the wealthiest man in Front Royal. Every girl wants to be Jacob’s girlfriend and wants to marry him.
    “Stop daydreaming John, we gotta clear the whole field before it rains” Said Pa
    “I am trying Pa but there are so many of them” I Said
    “Well hurry up we don’t got all day to waste” Said Pa

    At School

    Play rehearsals
    I didn’t know what to say and what not to say to Daisy. She is looking so stunning in her floral white dress with pink blossoms. You could just stare at her and forget everything. We both were feeling uneasy, but we never spoke a word other then the dialogues. She did her part and I did mine. Second day same thing happened she did her dialogues and I did mine. Everyday same thing happened and I had nothing to say to her. Next week was the play and Ms. Caroline was picking out our clothes for the play.

    On Friday
    Hey John how are you? Said Daisy
    I am perfect and you Daisy? I Said
    I am fine thanks, I wanted to invite you to my house tonight I am having a party Wana Come? Said Daisy
    “Sure I would love to” I Said
    “Ok then tonight at eight, I will see you then” Said Daisy

    She left and kissed me on my cheeks. I didn’t know what to wear and never in my life I wore suit and tie. I almost ran at home to ask mum what should I wear.

    Home
    Mum gave me Pa’s old suit and tie said that would look good on me. They were a bit overgrown for me but I didn’t argue that much because I knew the answer.

    At the Party

    Everyone from school was there; it’s a very big party. Daisy have a big house, I guess some people have all the luck and glory. Everyone looking well-dressed and even Looney have nice clothes on. I am the only lonely one without money and glory and sense of good dressing. Staring at people while sitting all by myself in the corner miserably. I couldn’t hear anything but music and my loneliness.

    “Hey John what ya doing in the corner come and enjoy” Said Daisy
    “Hey Daisy I am fine here, I can’t dance,” I Said
    “Would you like to dance with me?” Daisy Said
    “Sure I would love to but as I said before I cant dance” I Said
    “Just follow me and I will teach you” Daisy Said
    “Alright then” I Said

    Songs changed, mostly everyone left but our feet never stop dancing and our eyes never stop staring at each other. Her black dress with moonlight sparkles lit up the whole dance floor.

    On this beautiful moonlight night,
    Dazzling sparkles of the sand
    Wonderful smell of the breezy
    Dancing of the waves
    Lighting of the stars
    With a soft kiss I let go of her
    With my love to my perfect Utopia

    “I have to go home Daisy, see you at school” I Said
    She just blush and let me go.

    Walk to home isn’t that bad, the whole world lit up to me. I am flying in the sky and no one can stop me. This is the happiest day of my life.

    At home

    I couldn’t Daisy is the only girl who doesn’t like that Jacob. She pick me over him, I guess looks doesn’t matter.
    Sleeping on pale sleepless never-ending blanket of clouds. Dancing stars of the night and morning shine of the sun. I had got everything in life since Daisy is with me. I guess I am one of the lucky one whose dream is come true.

    Saturday
    Last day to the Bakers before autumn, I can’t believe I don’t have to see that Jacob’s face anymore.

    “Hurry John, clear every mess that you have made” Said Pa
    “Almost done Pa don’t worry” I Said
    “Let me see if Mr. Baker wants any other place to be cleared” Said Pa
    I had laughing and giggling from Jacob and his friends I guess. I couldn’t focus on my work because of them. Plus he was making fun of me, that I am a lousy loser. I couldn’t take it anymore my temper was going high every second.

    I was in the mood of beating him up. I swear no mercy this time. So I went up to his room, then what I saw I couldn’t believe my eyes. Daisy in Jacob’s arms and kissing him madly. It was like someone hit a hard stone to my heart. Every pieces of my heart shattered into tiny pieces. I couldn’t hear my voice but to stand they’re in misery.

    “I thought u liked me Daisy and looks doesn’t matter to you” I managed
    “Oh please John you were never my type even in million years” Said Daisy
    “I guess this what I get for loving a wealthy girl and thanks for showing me one night of love, I guess love is never meant for some people” I managed to say
    “I guess u wont care either if I jump of this window and killed myself in Jacob’s pool” I Said
    “Do hell I don’t give a damn” Said Daisy
    “Ya no place for you such morons here” Said Jacob
    “Deceiving is the best part of life in my case,” I Said
    “It was nice knowing you Daisy and I will always love you forever” I Said

    I ran fast as I could towards the window with wind in my hair drying my sweat away. I didn’t care about anything but I bet it would be better then my depressing life here. I jumped and hit the empty pool hard and bleed. Jacob and Daisy ran after me to stop me. It was like I am the rose and chained down into million pieces. I can see the light but no one to stop me from dying. As I lay dying Daisy walked above me.


    Because in my dream you kissed me and said goodbye….

    Love is very passionate, for others it’s very deceiving…

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    AWWWWWWWW good job
    sorry dude .... Hash

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    wow cool vetiiiiiiii

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    Thanks for sharing

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    Awesome job. Keep it up



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    Read it. A detailed review later on MSN. Been busy these days.

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    Beautifully written






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    AWESOMEEE JOB GG



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    very nice

    I usually forgive.. but only ma self

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    awwww ..... half way it was going so guuud....but the ending is so sad .....awwww....very nyce story falky.......
    me hate tht type of girlz




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    i hate it 2 Face THATS IT LOL
    sorry dude .... Hash

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    wow....amazing story...i welcome u like a new writer ur new dr writer lol

    thankuu soo much n bring more....

    is dat real story..... wat about character...
    mai F ko F hee Bolta ho lolzzz

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    Quote Originally Posted by ŃŃĔĎ View Post
    wow....amazing story...i welcome u like a new writer ur new dr writer lol

    thankuu soo much n bring more....

    is dat real story..... wat about character...
    nop am was jus inspired by reality
    sequel comin very soon
    oh thnk you so much for readin


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    Quote Originally Posted by ķЯĄζ Ң@Ψ Mế View Post
    i hate it 2 Face THATS IT LOL
    my dear friend its reality


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    Quote Originally Posted by ♥★Gσѕѕιρ~Ğιяℓ★♥ View Post
    my dear friend its reality
    No really its just Stupid
    sorry dude .... Hash

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    Quote Originally Posted by ķЯĄζ Ң@Ψ Mế View Post
    No really its just Stupid
    ok itz stupid but i bet u cant even write one word of story


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    Quote Originally Posted by ♥★Gσѕѕιρ~Ğιяℓ★♥ View Post
    ok itz stupid but i bet u cant even write one word of story
    kk lol...but when did i say anything abt dis story...dis is a good story....my gosh!!
    i said being a 2 face is just stupid its not reality...its a total diff convo...
    sorry dude .... Hash

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    Quote Originally Posted by ķЯĄζ Ң@Ψ Mế View Post
    kk lol...but when did i say anything abt dis story...dis is a good story....my gosh!!
    i said being a 2 face is just stupid its not reality...its a total diff convo...
    omg am so srry i thot u were talkin abt da story tht itz stupid
    u confused me
    ya being 2 face is stupid


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    Quote Originally Posted by ♥★Gσѕѕιρ~Ğιяℓ★♥ View Post
    omg am so srry i thot u were talkin abt da story tht itz stupid
    u confused me
    ya being 2 face is stupid
    lol i confused u...read stuff rite
    sorry dude .... Hash

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